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Category: College Essays

  • Applying to the UK? How to write your UCAS Personal Statement

    Applying to the UK? How to write your UCAS Personal Statement

    Expert Guide on How to Write a Good UCAS Personal Statement?

    In a recent blog, I introduced readers to the Universities and Colleges Admissions Service, or UCAS for short. In the article, I went over the elements that made up a UCAS application and briefly described the Personal Essay students need to write. In this blog, I will go into more detail about the essay, what it is and how to write it.

    In a nutshell…

    Your UCAS Personal Statement (PS) is the one opportunity to discuss why you want to study a particular degree. It is your chance to demonstrate your drive, ambitions, skills, and achievements, making you an excellent choice for the universities to which you have applied. Unfortunately, you only have a limited amount of room to sell yourself, 4,000 characters, spaces, and 47 lines, roughly one page of A4. This limitation means that you must express yourself clearly and succinctly, leaving little room for filler.

    Making a start

    Often the most challenging part, so don’t sit down with a blank document in front of you; writing your PS should start well before you write your first word. Take some time to understand the courses you are applying to by researching not just what the course studies but how you would study and how you can tailor your time at university to meet your needs.

    Using your research, use a mind map or spider diagram to make notes answering these questions.

    ·      What inspired you to study this subject? Perhaps there was a specific time when you decided that this was an area you wanted to understand better, or maybe you read a book or watched a TED Talk; if so, make a note of it.

    ·      What evidence can you provide that supports your interest and shows that it is more than superficial? An excellent personal statement will provide evidence of more extensive reading or participation in activities that support and extend your knowledge and understanding of the course you have picked.

    ·      How can you show that you have the skills and attributes to enable you to do well in the course? You will hopefully have some examples to share inside and outside the classroom.

    ·      How have your extra-curricular activities helped prepare you for university study? These might be academic exploration, team and leadership skills, or perhaps a prize for a literary competition you entered.

    ·      What have your studies taught you about the course you hope to apply for? For instance, if using it for an engineering course, what have you done through your high school curriculum that sparked your interest?

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    Putting it together

    Now that you have put all of your ideas in some order, now is the time to start putting words onto paper. A clear structure will help you write a PS with a natural flow and enable you to develop good transitions from one section of your PS to the next. For clarity, I have described the PS under headings; however, the PS you submit with your UCAS application should be written using something other than subheadings.

    Introduction

    Your role with the introduction is to grab the interest of the admissions tutor; they probably have to read hundreds of these PS, so try to make yours stand out. This might be the point to share a story about when you realized that the subject you are applying for was what you wanted to study.

    Academic achievements

    This should be something other than a list of subjects and grades; that information will go elsewhere in your application. Instead, you’d like to tell the admissions tutor about the specific things you have done in your curriculum with your interests, the course content, and how they’re doing.

    Extra-curricular activities

    Showcasing your abilities and interest in school shows how you have pursued those interests through extra-curricular activities. In addition, these extra-curricular activities demonstrate how you have followed your interests beyond the curriculum and different aspects of your personality that a university might look for, leadership, or an interest in broader issues facing humanity.

    Conclusion

    Your conclusion should tie in all the most critical aspects of your achievements into no more than two or three sentences. Then, finish with a clear, positive statement that encapsulates why the universities reading your PS should accept you.

    Final points

    You should expect to rewrite your PS a few times, but each time you think you have finished, read it out loud. It’s a great way to test the flow and identify any clunky language. Then, having done that, put it down overnight and proofread it again. Keep doing this until you stop making changes to what you have written. It is always a good idea to ask somebody who knows you well to read it before you add your essay to your UCAS application; they may pick up on something you have missed.

    Working with study abroad consultants, overseas education consultants, or, more commonly known, college counselors, can help you plan and perfect your personal statement. Ivy Central offers exceptional and experienced writers that can give you some of the best advice for your PS. Start today!

  • Still Writing Your Common App Essay? 5 Tips to Help You

    Still Writing Your Common App Essay? 5 Tips to Help You

    With the submission deadline for applying in the early round of US college applications rapidly approaching, you will hopefully be well on the way to finishing your personal essay. However, if you are struggling, this article will hopefully help as I share five tips from college admission professionals that can help you create a winning essay.

    For many students, writing a solid personal essay is the most challenging part of the application; its test comes because what is required is significantly different from the types of essays most students have been writing during their schooling. While it may be challenging, you must spend the time to create as powerful an essay as possible; this is the one opportunity you have to help the admissions teams get to ‘meet you’ and understand something about the individual behind the grades and scores.

    1. First impressions count

    Any student attending college should expect to do a great deal of writing, irrespective of their major. So, the first thing somebody reading your supplemental college essay will ask is, ‘Can this person write?’

    When you read your essay, is it well put together? A strong essay will nearly always have a strong theme or story that runs through it from beginning to end, with clear transitions from one paragraph to the next. Write using an active voice rather than the passive one generally expected for an academic essay; try to engage your reader from the very start so that you can be seen through your words. You should always ask people who know you well to read your essay; if they say that they can hear your voice as they read it, then you are probably a winner!

    Finally, grammar and spelling count; make sure you go through what you have written and check it with a good spelling and grammar checker. Again, make sure you are using American spellings.

    2. You are the story

    The college admissions team is reading your essay because they want to find out about you, so make sure that what you are writing about is you. It seems an obvious thing to say, but you would be surprised how often students write essays where they talk about their parents, grandparents, or teachers who have helped shape them into the person they are now. Unfortunately, this sort of supplemental essay rarely comes across well as you will inevitably spend much of your limited word count talking about what makes that person special rather than what makes you special, how you live your life as an individual, in the spirit of the person.

    To create a strong impression on the admissions officer, you want them to feel that they know what makes you who you are, your motivations, and your passions.

    3. Reflections

    Creating the strong impression I just mentioned requires you to reflect on who you are and how you became that person. This is something that many students find difficult, but without sharing that knowledge in your essay, you risk it will come across as shallow or, worse still, clichéd! On the other hand, sharing your reflections can add depth and character, making even an everyday experience, such as waiting for the school bus, into a profoundly revealing portrait of you and your life.

    4. Add value

    When talking about their work, top college and university admissions officers will speak about ‘crafting a community.’ What they mean by this is that they are not just trying to fill the number of places available; instead, they are looking for people who will contribute to the campus experience. So in your personal essay, try to focus on your genuine strengths, using anecdotes that will best portray them.

    5. Be consistent

    Be clear about what impression you want to create in the minds of the people who will read your application. Having done that, ensure your application, including your essay, aligns with that picture. For example, suppose you want your essay to portray you as a passionate biology researcher. In that case, you don’t want your activities to reflect a person who loves to spend their time deep into self-published online stories. If your essay does not resonate with the rest of your application, you need to take a step back and consider how you can make the whole application reflect who you are. Ivy Central always here to help you.

    Good luck!

  • Supplemental Essays: A Take on Short Takes

    Supplemental Essays: A Take on Short Takes

    Supplemental Essays: A Take on Short Takes

    The Application Season is here and we are as excited as you are!

    In this blog, I will take you through tips for writing those seemingly insignificant short take supplemental questions that first few, now many, colleges are including as part of their mandatory essay requirements. This year has seen a rise in Short-Take Questions asked by colleges. Well, if you are wondering why here’s the reason –

    Like the Short Answer Questions, Short Takes too are extremely personal ‘essays’ but the difference is that these help the University get to know a LOT about you in just a FEW words. These could range from 25 characters to 100 words. Let’s look at which Universities love to ask Short Takes:

    1. Stanford University

    • What is the most significant challenge that society faces today?*

    • How did you spend your last two summers?*

    • What historical moment or event do you wish you could have witnessed?*

    • Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities, a job you hold, or responsibilities you have for your family.*

    • Name one thing you are looking forward to experiencing at Stanford.*

    2. University of Southern California

    • Describe yourself in three words. First Word:* Second Word. Third Word. (25 characters each)

    • What is your favorite snack?*

    • Best movie of all time:*

    • Dream job:*

    • If your life had a theme song, what would it be?*

    • Dream trip:*

    • What TV show will you binge watch next? *

    • Which well-known person or fictional character would be your ideal roommate?*

    • Favorite book:*

    • If you could teach a class on any topic, what would it be?*

    3. Columbia University

    • List the titles of the required readings from academic courses that you enjoyed most during secondary/high school. (75 words or fewer)*

    • List the titles of the books, essays, poetry, short stories or plays you read outside of academic courses that you enjoyed most during secondary/high school. (75 words or fewer)*

    • We’re interested in learning about some of the ways that you explore your interests. List some resources and outlets that you enjoy, including but not limited to websites, publications,  journals, podcasts, social media accounts, lectures, museums, movies, music, or other content with which you regularly engage. (125 words or fewer)*

    General Tips to Answer Short Take Questions

    1. Do not take them lightly 

    Short Takes need to be taken as seriously as the longer supplemental questions. They would be evaluated nearly the same way the other common essays would be. Short Takes in themselves are an excellent way to judge character, so ensure you are not underestimating them.

    2. Include a variety, wherever appropriate

    Short Takes on books you have read, movies you have watched etc are included to see if you like to learn for the sake of learning. Do you only read/watch subject specific books/movies or would you expose yourself to a myriad other topics?

    For reading lists, you want to include something from the fiction and non fiction categories, while also mentioning different literary forms (poetry/short stories/novellas) and genres (go beyond sci fiction).

    3. Make meaningful connections

    For Short Takes that allow you the space to explain your choice, do form an uncommon, meaningful, personal connection with yourself. For example, if you picked the ‘Purple Hibiscus’ by Adichie, explain why you enjoyed reading it. Was it because you started analysing the role of religious propaganda in Nigeria, or got a chance to explore an English dialect? This also becomes a way for you to differentiate yourself from your peers applying to the same university.

    Your Dream Trip should probably not be Vegas. Try something that’s relatively unexplored, but also aligns with your personality.

    4. Demonstrate a strong interest in your intended field of study 

    Continuing the example above, what you choose to write about can be a strong indicator of your interest in a specific major. Mention books you’ve read outside of your class that align with these subject areas and also unique takeaways from the books you have read inside and outside of the classroom.

    Here are a couple of recommendations –

    a) News Articles – to demonstrate that you like to be aware of what’s happening in the world (Economics/Finance/Business)

    b) Historical Fiction – such as the Kite Runner (History/Literature)

    c) Shoe Dog – Design/Business

    d) The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks (Biomedical Sciences/Pre-med/Race Studies/Law)

    Along with these, it is also a good idea to select those texts that have helped you gain time management skills (Mindset – Carol Derek) and further develop your interests or hobbies.

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    5. Be Creative

    Do try to give thoughtful and thought-provoking answers to these questions. Be creative where you need to be, and try to incorporate humor where you can.

    Final word

    Short Takes are a lot of fun, but, ironically take longer to complete. Do start early, and explore different options before closing in on a final one. Wish you luck with your Short Takes!

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